Nice man, not as good as the original in my opinion, but it's pretty cool.
-Liked the bass and the weird clap thing. The way they sounded was nice but they just didn't fit the song in my opinion. You should use em' more in your later songs though.
-The whole song felt wayyy too slow. Which kinda detracted from the power the original had.
-All the instruments just weren't powerful/loud enough. And sounded kinda synthetic on the more sustained notes at times.
-Main problem with this song is the tempo. It's just simply way too slow. As I was listening I felt like I was in slo-mo or something' weird like that.
-Some more melody variations could've worked but it's easy to overlook.
Well yeah, nice song man. Keep em' coming. 5/5, peace.