Great song man, but I feel like I could make some suggestions in order for you to get to around Zajed's level no offense. Heh, well yeah, here they are:
-Beat is a bit too overpowering over the other instruments, and speaking of the beat, I feel like you could vary it in general like at the song refrains or something, but that's really up to you.
-The strings sound kind of artificial and bland at times, like at the entrance at 22 seconds. I feel like you could incorporate more melodies that complimented and intertwined/flowed with each other in order to make the song sound more powerful in general. The weird pinging sound that started around 1:03 I felt like kind of detracted from the song. It just simply sounded weird...
-The cymbal crashes were kind of loud.
-The brass sounded pretty good, but like I said before, vary the melodies a bit, and that leads me to my next suggestion.
-Vary the whole song in general, it gets a bit too repetitive near the end, but it's not that much of a problem.
But yeah, all my bitching aside, the is a great song man, keep up the good work and keep this stuff coming, 4/5.